Friday, May 16, 2008

I was fifteen

you said,

"Don't
take
yourself
so
seriously."


I remembered that today

Yesterday
I watched a wren's throat as she sang

2 comments:

Busplunge said...

This is wonderful. The editor in me wants to say try "when" in place of "yesterday".

There is a whole novel here in less than 25 words!

A+

Jacke M. said...

Thanks, Jim.

Poetry, my first dream, who knows, maybe my last dream.