Friday, May 16, 2008

I was fifteen

you said,

"Don't
take
yourself
so
seriously."


I remembered that today

Yesterday
I watched a wren's throat as she sang
at

2 comments:

  1. Busplunge11:29 PM

    This is wonderful. The editor in me wants to say try "when" in place of "yesterday".

    There is a whole novel here in less than 25 words!

    A+

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  2. Jackie Melton12:17 AM

    Thanks, Jim.

    Poetry, my first dream, who knows, maybe my last dream.

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